Ideal Friend

本帖於 2022-12-14 07:55:21 時間, 由普通用戶 CBA7 編輯

《Ideal Friend》
by CBA7(小西)

he/she is in a corner of this world
near or far
not in an ideal world
but he/she is an ideal friend
brings rainbows in rainy days
silent in sunny days

《理想的朋友》
by CBA7(小西)

他/她在這個世界的一個角落裏
或近或遠
不在理想的世界裏
但他/她是一個理想的朋友
雨天帶來彩虹
晴天沉默

P.S. This poem was inspired by Ray Cope, a British poet, and his poem Ideal World below

Ideal World.
by Ray cope

In an ideal world-------
I'm in a cottage by a lake.
A cottage,nestling against woodland.
I'm clad in denim.
I'm shod in wellington boots.
I'm tending a garden:
There's a dog [ perhaps two ] by my side.
And a wise old cat who lurks in the hedgerow.
I'm stooping amidst flowers.
Grubbing happily in the loam.
Contented:

In an ideal world ----
I'm in a canoe, gaily painted.
Out in the water.
A sharp - edged craft of native American ilk.
I'm watching fish rise.
I watch the wild duck bobbing.
I catch the sun on my paddle,
as i glide silently by.
Through water-lilies,through rushes.
Sometimes drifting with the breeze.
Unconcerned:

In an ideal world ----
I'm in a forest,bathed in dappled shadows.
I'm rustling through leaf litter.
I'm snapping twigs underfoot.
I'm listening to birdsong.
And the scamperings of small things.
There's a dog [ perhaps two ] roving ahead of me.
I am in awe of the greenness.
I am the watcher of bees.
I am brother to The Green Man.
Fortunate am i:
【Ray's poem was published on Allpoetry, the largest and best poetry site in the world】


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有韻味的詩!謝謝介紹這個詩人,和他學會好多漂亮的描寫,比如dappled shadows -妖妖靈- 給 妖妖靈 發送悄悄話 妖妖靈 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 12/14/2022 postreply 12:00:57

謝謝靈靈的點評和鼓勵。靈靈好學,向靈靈學習! -CBA7- 給 CBA7 發送悄悄話 CBA7 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 12/14/2022 postreply 12:07:12

是在美壇養成的習慣,看到不認識的英文單詞都要查一查:)話說現在查單詞好方便,點一下單詞就知道意思了:) -妖妖靈- 給 妖妖靈 發送悄悄話 妖妖靈 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 12/14/2022 postreply 12:23:31

好習慣! -CBA7- 給 CBA7 發送悄悄話 CBA7 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 12/14/2022 postreply 12:33:49

小妖可太謙虛了 -煙酒嗓- 給 煙酒嗓 發送悄悄話 煙酒嗓 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 12/14/2022 postreply 13:03:36

開心看到煙帥來美壇玩!來發帖吧!你的詩寫得那麽好,歌那麽好聽!:)實話實說,真的是在美壇養成的習慣,以前就是囫圇吞棗:) -妖妖靈- 給 妖妖靈 發送悄悄話 妖妖靈 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 12/14/2022 postreply 17:31:19

詩人寫得太精彩了!在涼薄的世界裏是多麽需要溫暖與色彩呀! -煙酒嗓- 給 煙酒嗓 發送悄悄話 煙酒嗓 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 12/14/2022 postreply 13:06:23

這個跟貼多麽有詩意!:) -妖妖靈- 給 妖妖靈 發送悄悄話 妖妖靈 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 12/14/2022 postreply 17:28:43

同感! -CBA7- 給 CBA7 發送悄悄話 CBA7 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 12/14/2022 postreply 20:14:04

謝謝詩人歌星的點評和鼓勵! -CBA7- 給 CBA7 發送悄悄話 CBA7 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 12/14/2022 postreply 20:13:32

恭喜小西。首頁進來,謝謝網管,Ideal Friend 推薦成功 -梅雨潭- 給 梅雨潭 發送悄悄話 (0 bytes) () 12/15/2022 postreply 17:45:36

謝謝梅雨潭版主的支持 -CBA7- 給 CBA7 發送悄悄話 CBA7 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 12/15/2022 postreply 19:41:46

Being an ideal friend is the best way to get ideal friends. -renqiulan- 給 renqiulan 發送悄悄話 (0 bytes) () 12/15/2022 postreply 21:14:29

I can't agree more. -CBA7- 給 CBA7 發送悄悄話 CBA7 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 12/16/2022 postreply 07:08:22

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