Grandma's recipes

A tiny little book reads

like collecting every piece of the crumb

As birds' rapid eyes

screen for the lost home

 

I researched the book

And had barely found

The sweetest look

between a touch and a mind

 

The parsley grows every year

below the window like a spell

The rain cries every tear

only a chimney can gently tell

 

It was a rainy day

with a full taste of the past memories

And the smell swirled away

in grasses, flowers, and trees

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• The sweetest look between a touch and a mind... -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/30/2022 postreply 17:08:32

• 謝謝盈盈賞讀：）You are always sweet, and being the sweetest -kirn- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/31/2022 postreply 05:06:11

• 小k的詩，一定會注意押韻的，果然每段的隔行押韻，好有味道。 -妖妖靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/30/2022 postreply 20:54:18

• 靈妹妹知道我的軟肋。。在廚房寫東西，努加點味道 -kirn- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/31/2022 postreply 05:07:16

• 這首寫得老道，看不出中式英語得任何痕跡了。 -楓林曉- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/30/2022 postreply 23:07:43

• 謝謝謬讚，我沒發現老道啊。我特地找我上小學的娃讀了，經她審閱以後發的。我知道就是小學生的水平。 -kirn- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/31/2022 postreply 05:10:31

• 有點兒傷感有點兒甜的recipes -輕輕的我來- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/31/2022 postreply 09:33:05

• 謝謝輕兄品：） -kirn- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/31/2022 postreply 13:25:40

• 新朋友很棒。點過讚了。 周末愉快。 -chuntianle- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/31/2022 postreply 16:22:26

• 恭喜小k。首頁進來，謝謝網管，Grandma's recipes 推薦成功 -梅雨潭- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/01/2022 postreply 16:25:03

• 謝謝版主！ -kirn- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/02/2022 postreply 22:25:39