關於食物的詩歌

中國有餡餅好吃的詩，不知是否受了這個有名的吃 plum 的影響

 

This Is Just To Say

William Carlos Williams

I have eaten
the plums
that were in
the icebox

and which
you were probably
saving
for breakfast

Forgive me
they were delicious
so sweet
and so cold

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Tony1 - ← This Guy's been boasting, crowing, laughing about having eaten his wife's plums now for the last like 75 years, and everybody says Gee What Poetry. Isn't it time for womanhood to answer the creep back, along the lines of next time watch out for your own plums MIster Poetaster with three names and get somebody else to "Forgive" u.2 years ago 

Tony1 - I spoke to your wife she's leaving you.8 days ago 

Tony1 - So tired of this guy eating those darn plums I hope he chokes on em the next time this is posted.4 months ago 

Alanvolner453 - Sounds like great sarcasm

Lovely share9 days ago 

Vera-Lynn - An amazing share - thank you for writing this piece11 days ago 

Kristin-RM- - I loved this!! So simple. It reminded me of when people eat my leftovers in the fridge. You go all day looking forward to eating them, too. -.-a month ago 

Sydney Washington - great write.

Lovely.a month ago 

Bad Jonny - I like the simplicity an irreverance of this one - good stuff2 months ago 

Meryl Brailsford - typical man to have everything!!!!!2 months ago 

Debbi - Nicely written. The last stanza speaks to me the most. Good job on FPP5 months ago 

Alexander Shaumyan - Nice and simple. But that's about it for me. I don't see any deep poetic message here. I'm reminded of the story in 2016  when a teenager left a pair of glasses on floor of San Francisco’s Museum of Modern Art as a prank, leading some to think they were an exhibit.   As Bukowski would say: “Great art is horseshit, buy tacos.”7 months ago 

Pratanubanerjee - I appreciate william carlos for those fantastic words that mesmerized me.8 months ago 

i.f.a - concise yet enjoyable!

 

俺不是很感冒，讀後感和上麵的 Alexander Shaumyan 一樣。雖然不感冒，俺也學著玩

Sharp cheddar

The girl on a ladder
in a red dress
reaches for sharp cheddar
that sits on top of a mess
in the hushed attic
who often radiates static
The dome skylight sharpens the moonlight
and puts a scared mouse in the spotlight

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• 再賞名詩 -LinMu- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/10/2022 postreply 00:42:07

• 看了幾個評論笑噴了，我也覺得這首所謂詩歌很欠揍 -移花接木- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/10/2022 postreply 05:15:44

• 簡單而美好，讚！謝音分享：） -忒忒綠- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/10/2022 postreply 07:13:00

• 什麽都能成詩：） -妖妖靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/10/2022 postreply 09:10:27

• 難道隻有我看了以後沒胃口嗎？ -kirn- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/10/2022 postreply 13:36:41

• 酸嗎：） -忒忒綠- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/10/2022 postreply 15:31:00

• 這是英文詩中的梨花體嗎？ -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/10/2022 postreply 18:46:49

• 謝謝留言，梨花體名聲不咋地 -顫音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/11/2022 postreply 13:44:21

• 不會啊。梨花體也有好詩的，比如娜夜的《舊衣服 》。 -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (24334 bytes) () 06/11/2022 postreply 17:09:58

• 點讚。 -chuntianle- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/13/2022 postreply 00:15:44