《May I Offer This to You》詩二首 · 歌一曲

網紅新歌《二泉吟》

This song is beautiful and deeply touching, meanwhile conveys emotions which match the world's current moods well.

Enjoy listening to the song and reading the verses. Could you find some connections between them?

 

《May I Offer This to You》

by TweetinGreen and TwoHedgehogs

May I offer this to you?
have a cup of tea with you
listening to the chirps of birds
meditate together
or stare at the sky
in a daze side by side
Would that be what you like?

May I offer this to you?
go on hikes with you
roam in the parks hand in hand
or elope with you to sit on a sandbank
watching the tides
go in and out
Would that be what you like?

May I offer them to you?

《Sky Leaks》

by TweetinGreen

children cry
ladies weep
seniors sigh
youngs groan

the sky leaks

What're there high above
clouds
a heaven
golds
lightning
souls
and …

when will it be
refurbished
and sunshine and
you be
there only







 

所有跟帖： 

• 友友們一周愉快：）歌來自網絡，不是我唱的：）） -忒忒綠- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/06/2022 postreply 16:54:00

• 歌和第二首詩意境比較像。第一首看天看海看潮汐，好浪漫。誰是Twohedgehogs？ -妖妖靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/06/2022 postreply 18:33:37

• 聰明的鳳，是的第二首與歌的情緒關聯更多：）不過第一首的基調也是抑鬱的：） -忒忒綠- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/06/2022 postreply 18:52:00

• 是一位網上詩友：） -忒忒綠- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/06/2022 postreply 18:54:00

• 讚！品讀。。。 -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/07/2022 postreply 09:54:02

• Sad, but so touching and beautiful, thanks for sharing. -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/09/2022 postreply 08:11:34

• touching! your words， not the music :-) -顫音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/09/2022 postreply 15:06:21

• 點讚。很棒。 -chuntianle- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/13/2022 postreply 00:26:40