墨水和顏料

Paint flows from your eyes

Paint flows from your eyes
purple
to your dimples
Aspirates to rise
and brush my sky
till the clouds
red and blue
fill my eyes

© a day ago

Likes: Jawahar Gupta, Beatricelena

Jawahar Gupta - Paint flows from your eyes to brush the canvas f my mind of sky with colors of your first hand choice to make the happy rainbow,

Enjoyed it

Beatricelena - Such a beautiful poem. short but meaningful. looking forward to your new publications.

 

Ink

I'm writing to you in blue
my known unknown
It's the ink gifted by you
What's flowing from the fountain
makes my pen stroll through mountains
oceans and dunes
and lost in a misty tune
But the burden
of the ink
wet and heavy like a steel curtain
wraps around my feet and sinks
to the Milky Way's brink

© 7 days ago, vague • rhyme   
 

Likes: Jawahar Gupta, Jaganathan1476, KeshmaiTo reply, click a comment.

Jawahar Gupta - this is beautiful writing to admit the honest received gift,

Liked it

 

Jaganathan1476 - Good rhyming poem dear friend.i love reading poems that rhyme.great work. keep on it. 

 

Keshmai - Writing what you feel is a powerful thing to do. Thank you for this inspirational poem.

Lovely

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• ink 和blue用得巧妙。What's flowing from the fountain 句子裏的‘s 有必要嗎？ -妖妖靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/31/2022 postreply 21:12:42

• 謝謝，是啊，可以考慮present tense -顫音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/01/2022 postreply 11:35:33

• Flowers fill my eyes of purple & my heart sings a vibrato -移花接木- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/01/2022 postreply 07:11:33

• 謝謝 -顫音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/01/2022 postreply 11:35:50

• 恭喜顫音。首頁進來，謝謝網管，墨水和顏料 推薦成功 -梅雨潭- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/01/2022 postreply 13:51:22

• 深深感謝！ -顫音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/02/2022 postreply 09:48:05