When wind carves

When wind carves

When wind carves
I rush to cover your hair with a scarf
But I tumble
amid wind's rumble
So the scarf flies in curve
to the rhythm of wind's swerve
till it touches your face that's void of crumple
Your face that keeps wind humble
For millions of years your beauty is conserved
by the wind that admires and carves

inspired by Lady in the wind in lower antelope canyon © 9 days ago

  
 Like (2) 
 

Lou Lou.x - you create such a vivid image and scroll a piece with a good rhyme scheme and flow 

7 days ago 

 

G910513 - I like the imagery used here, and that opening line is a very memorable one.

8 days ago 

 

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