Between black and white 難得上一次首頁

Between black and white

Ginkgo turns yellow
Maple turns red
And I as if turn teen
Gaze at you from far
Your hair
black
Your neck
white
Between black and white
hides the love I once had

The meadow by the lake turns green
Your dress flutters neon
And I bend down
to scoop with my empty hands
Soil under your feet
black
Summits in the distance
white
Between black and white
I'm waiting for your return

Rain turns blue
wets the melody of bell tolls
How can all my prayers
rise through those clouds
black
Falling snowflakes
white
Between black and white
I stroke the newborn moss
separations © a month ago 

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Likes: kevin, Nela Madjarac, AngelBee, HBey K, kaye, Edward Louis Lemons, Matthew T., OniWong, hesychiaaaa, Caramel latte, Natalie Grace33, Roddy

Matthew T. - The style and wording you used really appeals to me. Something resonates that I can't quite pinpoint.  Regardless,  a beautiful piece.

a month ago 

 

HBey K - It is very suffering to wait for a  so faithful love to be concrete. Within the harsh separation hope and despair enhance the worry. Great and meant expression!

Inspired me

a month ago 

 

OniWong - Between black and white
I'm waiting for your return

although It sounds sad, these poetic lines are heartfelt expressions. It drags me to read to the last line.  Great

a month ago 

 

AngelBee - i ike the sentence rain turns blue i loved the poem esecialy melody of bel tolls feel free to comment on a world so deep poem id appreciate it

a month ago 

 

Caramel latte - Great use of colours! "Between black and white" - no shades of grey, because you're either with or without her, like this metaphor a lot 

Enjoyed it a month ago 

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• 寫得真好！黑白的運用自然貼切，很有韻味！喜歡這首！ -妖妖靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/23/2022 postreply 10:01:48

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• 恭喜顫音。首頁進來，謝謝網管，Between black and white 難得上一次首頁 推薦成功 -梅雨潭- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/24/2022 postreply 18:23:57

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