歌唱得好！歌詞翻譯也不錯，讚天山！

If no separation of painful moments --> If no painful moments of separation

Even if it's like a hot moment --> Even if in a hot moment like this
To whom can I tell in my heart --> To whom can I tell the words in my heart

Just some of my suggestions :) 

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• Good suggestion！謝謝蟲蟲鼓勵和指正！節日同樂！ -天山晨- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/26/2021 postreply 10:33:08