Sea, 楓林音畫，偷摸英文文青，被兒子發現，怕被笑話，趕緊虛心請教，結果改了好幾處。哈哈 算是合作，it is fun

 

Sea

楓林音畫

Alone I sit
upon the shore to night
There she is 
pumping like a dark
deafening heart

I see a shadow
a shadowy ghost 
touching the breasts
sobbing like a baby in the depth
of water that grows cold and pale

Forgive me,
cause I am sailing 
into the night
into that battling sea
to steal the pearl
from the raging sea

Beyond those thousands hills and cliffs
Where you
You are fading into steel
steel waves of the song of mine
singing the story of the unforgiving sea
riding the strings in the symphony of soul

所有跟帖： 

• 楓林楓小林合作得天衣無縫：）真是仿佛交響樂團在和湊在共鳴，和往常曲風明顯不同，現在更厚重如山，沉重如海：） -beautifulwind- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/17/2021 postreply 21:28:11

• 好詩好曲！太讚父子合作！ -天山晨- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/18/2021 postreply 09:22:54

• 音樂弄潮兒 -移花接木- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/18/2021 postreply 10:20:35