My Girl

<< My Girl >>

(Listen to the Chinese folk songs for more than 2 hours, and I came up with my own .... lol)

Only about some 30 plus years ago
Your smile stole my heart and soul
Day and night I dreamed of you
Mood swing from high to low
Glad I told you my feeling and did not hold
Finally you became my girl
Holding your hand to start our 2-person show
It made me the happiest man in the world
Time flew by without taking its toll
Yesteryear's fire is still burning and will never get cold
Every glimpse of you still reminds me of our first hello
Our love story is still young, never old
I am looking forward
For another 30 years to come
Let's continue to sail our love boat
Be my captain to bring joy home

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• Very nice piece; love it. Thank you for sharing. -ibelieu- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/15/2021 postreply 13:12:09

• Thank you for liking it -以美麗回答一切- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/15/2021 postreply 13:20:00

• inspiration from Chinese songs? a very nice piece, bravo! -忒忒綠- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/15/2021 postreply 13:21:00

• yep lol -以美麗回答一切- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/15/2021 postreply 13:34:00

• “隻要一生愛一人”！好長時間不見回答，趕緊來參加綁架活動吧！ -beautifulwind- ♀ (135 bytes) () 07/15/2021 postreply 13:27:47

• sorry, have been busy with work …,, -以美麗回答一切- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/15/2021 postreply 13:35:00

• 這就是納蘭容若筆下的一生一代一雙人吧。長情摯愛，讓人羨慕。祝福。 -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/15/2021 postreply 13:33:33

• lol. Thanks -以美麗回答一切- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/15/2021 postreply 13:35:00

• 我就喜歡這樣的作品，靈感一來擋不住，好多佳作都是這樣產生，後續可進一步完善，但這靈感一過較勁腦汁出來的就覺得dull -移花接木- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/15/2021 postreply 15:52:32

• very true ???? -以美麗回答一切- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/15/2021 postreply 16:12:00

• very true :) -以美麗回答一切- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/15/2021 postreply 16:13:00

• 真好！ -甜蟲蟲- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/15/2021 postreply 20:13:08

• Thanks -以美麗回答一切- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/15/2021 postreply 20:18:00

• 好詩，能看懂哈！有感覺！ -天山晨- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/17/2021 postreply 06:56:46

• :) -以美麗回答一切- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/17/2021 postreply 07:14:00