寫出我的第一首英文歌曲“ Are You Ready", 感謝LiuMu提供的靈感

把人家的英文詩改得麵目全非：)

Baby, are you ready
Let's climb the mountains,
 While you stand by me.
Baby, are you ready
Let's touch the waves 
Let's go to see the sea
Baby, I miss your smile
Like whispering wind, you sent to me.

Baby, as we promised
Don't be sad, don't hold your tears
I know I am a fool
But I know you are my world
If you bled
I bleed the same
If you're scared
I am on my way.

Baby, are you ready
Let's walk in the clouds,
 Touching the dream
Baby, are you ready
Let me hold your hands
Say I love you

 

所有跟帖： 

• very nice shot! -忒忒綠- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/26/2021 postreply 08:34:00

• Love is thick in the air! I love it. -ibelieu- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/26/2021 postreply 08:45:43

• 能把英文歌隨手彈唱得如此行雲流水般流暢好聽，你真是第一人！你的進步真是像坐了火箭一樣！：） -beautifulwind- ♀ (45 bytes) () 06/26/2021 postreply 10:39:20

• 美壇出人才啊 -忒忒綠- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/26/2021 postreply 16:11:00

• will not let one u unturned;)) -忒忒綠- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/26/2021 postreply 16:12:00

• 有typo嗎？ -beautifulwind- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/26/2021 postreply 17:44:00

• 能寫詞，能作曲，能彈，能唱的全能型音樂人！聽得出來，這歌詞裏加入了歌者自己的元素和故事，還有情感。欣賞。 -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/26/2021 postreply 12:15:48

• 再聽再讚！周末聽挺好！ -天山晨- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/26/2021 postreply 13:03:22

• 果然是高手，上來就baby ，直接了當 -移花接木- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/26/2021 postreply 15:06:15

• 一直baby沒停過；） -忒忒綠- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/26/2021 postreply 16:55:00

• 動聽！大讚 -疏影笑寒- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/26/2021 postreply 20:06:53

• 恭喜欲哥。謝謝網管，首頁進來，寫出我的第一首英文歌曲“ Are You Ready", 感謝LiuMu提供的靈感 推薦成功 -beautifulwind- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/28/2021 postreply 22:43:33

• 先大大地點個讚！ 然後再“挑刺”。“挑刺”比原創容易多了，so here are 老漢's 2 cents: -johniewalker- ♂ (816 bytes) () 06/29/2021 postreply 08:24:10