I remember we slept outside too in some hot summer nights, and watched the stars sparkling up high in the sky. It's such a pleasant memory!
Mountains tall and low :)
A few nouns in your article, I think they should be plurals. And there should be an article before a singular noun. :)
The train station had (a) waiting area (and a) ticket office. In front of the building was a Square which was used as (a) temperary waiting area in peak time(s).