【ChildhoodFantasy】 Infinity

Infinity

Staring at ME in a mirror
Please answer
How do I reach Infinity
Sure
Me's answer as silent as divinity
Erect another mirror behind your path
Chase life in the bouncing light
Your journey as eternal as in math

vaguely philosophical © a year ago, xx   life   
 Like (2) 
Comment - What did you think? 
 
 

Likes: Jenny Middleton, K.P2To reply, click a comment.

Jenny Middleton - I like the visual reality of this poem Bashan, anyone that's ever looked in a mirror to see another mirror reflection of the back of their head will understand how clever this imagery is as a metaphor of eternity, journey and self perception.11 months ago 

 

K.P2 - Great poem and good use of metaphors. Also a good lesson at the enda year ago 

 

所有跟帖： 

• 哇， 這是目前我讀過你的詩裏最喜歡的一首！Jenny的評論真棒，把你的詩洞察得一清二楚！ -beautifulwind- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/08/2021 postreply 09:05:05

• Again..Vincent.. -青鬆站- ♀ (325 bytes) () 06/08/2021 postreply 09:30:25

• 鏡子套鏡子確實就是無限拉長影像，我記得拍過這樣一張照片，想不到成了你詩的內容，寫得好！ -天山晨- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/08/2021 postreply 09:48:46

• 我小時候的一道數學考題，天安門上有多少個國徽 -移花接木- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/08/2021 postreply 10:39:31

• 你怎麽答的？無數個？ -beautifulwind- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/08/2021 postreply 20:31:45

• I think is very well done! -何仙姑- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/08/2021 postreply 12:02:44

• 寫得真棒！ -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/08/2021 postreply 17:54:05

• 謝謝 -顫音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/09/2021 postreply 08:12:31

• 恭喜顫音。首頁進來，謝謝網管，CF活動 Infinity 推薦成功 -beautifulwind- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/11/2021 postreply 17:10:49