【ChildhoodFantasy】Once upon a time

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Once upon a time


Once upon a time,
I stepped on half a dime.
For the other half, I searched the playground,
but wished for a pound.
I stumbled and so flied the half dime,
in a curve ended in a lily pond.
I heard giggles as resonating as chime,
before I turned my body around.
It's the girl from my neighbor,
in her hands a snow-white lily flower.
She shrouded me with a smell of thyme,
and left on my bruised lips a taste of lime.

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This is a poem just for a poem and well constructed, alive and happy.4 years ago 

 

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Nice!Your poem rhymes as lyrics! -beautifulwind- 給 beautifulwind 發送悄悄話 beautifulwind 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 06/07/2021 postreply 08:12:14

學習了,真有意思,為了押韻也是夠拚了, 我理解是為了押韻把nickel叫1/2 dime, 而不是真的半拉1角硬幣 -移花接木- 給 移花接木 發送悄悄話 移花接木 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 06/07/2021 postreply 08:33:44

都是,所以是fantasy,謝謝 -顫音- 給 顫音 發送悄悄話 顫音 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 06/08/2021 postreply 07:36:50

很有心思的E詩,雅韻的詩確實讀來好聽! -天山晨- 給 天山晨 發送悄悄話 天山晨 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 06/07/2021 postreply 13:12:31

很有心思的E詩,雅韻的詩確實讀來好聽! - 天山晨 -盈盈一笑間- 給 盈盈一笑間 發送悄悄話 盈盈一笑間 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 06/08/2021 postreply 07:00:35

謝謝閱讀點評 -顫音- 給 顫音 發送悄悄話 顫音 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 06/08/2021 postreply 07:37:48

Once upon a time.. -青鬆站- 給 青鬆站 發送悄悄話 青鬆站 的博客首頁 (264 bytes) () 06/08/2021 postreply 13:03:46

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