Here is the link to Merriam-Webster for “dawn” . It

is clearly listed only as an intransitive verb.  
https://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/dawn

Here is anther dictionary.  It says "dawn", as a verb, should be used "without object".

https://www.dictionary.com/browse/dawn

You used it correctly in "...Memorial Day will dawn bright and beautiful".  In "Free Verse for a Free Spirit", however, you were clearly using it as a transitive verb by giving it an object in "my world."  Unless you can claim poetic license, you are wrong in your usage.  I doubt your being a native speaker of English can in any way change this fact.

I shoot straight, too.  

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• 謝謝 -LYJiang- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/23/2021 postreply 21:43:30

• I wonder what your original sentence was. :) -甜蟲蟲- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/24/2021 postreply 09:54:33