【梅雨潭的愛】【Time to say good bye】

開了15年的愛車被冰雹砸了，被保險公司報廢了。車子被拖走的那天有感而寫。

【Time to say good bye】

It seems to be last night

You came with beauty and shy

Washed you all the time

Made you prettier and shine

With the years passed by

We traveled to parks and countryside

Even to cities mile high

So much joy and delight

Memories bring me smile

Also make me want to cry

Happy journey ended with hailing and flash light

Now it's time to say good bye

With tears in my eye

I cannot decide what to buy

A new convertible sounds about right

Will make me cool and my numbered hair fly

Hope my wife will not have my dream denied

Make me again a happy guy

 

 

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• 好有趣的小詩！短評最後兩句:Happy wife, happy life. Make your wife happy first -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (177 bytes) () 05/17/2021 postreply 07:30:21

• Absolutely :) Good point :) -以美麗回答一切- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/17/2021 postreply 07:33:22

• Good advice. -ibelieu- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/17/2021 postreply 07:49:33

• I really like this piece; sad, full of nostalgia, at first, and -ibelieu- ♀ (308 bytes) () 05/17/2021 postreply 07:42:54

• Thank you very much for your compliments. -以美麗回答一切- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/17/2021 postreply 07:48:33

• your love to your old car won't die -唐古- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/17/2021 postreply 07:56:42

• I think so too :-) -以美麗回答一切- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/17/2021 postreply 11:41:40

• 唯一美中不足，就是完美。：-） -陶陶三- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/17/2021 postreply 08:06:39

• :-) Thank you very much -以美麗回答一切- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/17/2021 postreply 11:42:11

• 歡迎新朋友來美壇玩！很能押韻啊，厲害！也唱出來吧！也歡迎來參加【梅雨潭的愛】活動： -beautifulwind- ♀ (304 bytes) () 05/17/2021 postreply 09:02:49

• 謝謝版主 ：-） -以美麗回答一切- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/17/2021 postreply 11:43:02

• Well write ! Old love is true love. -輕輕的我來- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/17/2021 postreply 11:46:15

• U mean, new love is not true love?:) -beautifulwind- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/17/2021 postreply 12:44:34

• new love needs testing. -輕輕的我來- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/17/2021 postreply 13:44:55

• Thanks. Love is love :-) -以美麗回答一切- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/17/2021 postreply 13:43:32

• excellent writing! -日月茗- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/17/2021 postreply 12:50:00

• Thank you :-) -以美麗回答一切- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/17/2021 postreply 13:44:26

• 開心日月茗再次冒泡！歡迎來美壇參加活動： -beautifulwind- ♀ (351 bytes) () 05/17/2021 postreply 20:26:42

• 這歌詞真牛 -移花接木- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/18/2021 postreply 12:57:34

• 謝謝喜歡 ：-） -以美麗回答一切- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/18/2021 postreply 13:54:50

• 恭喜回答。首頁進來，謝謝網管，Time to say good bye 推薦成功（推薦文學城首頁成功） -beautifulwind- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/18/2021 postreply 13:47:54

• 謝謝版主推薦。 -以美麗回答一切- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/18/2021 postreply 13:57:36

• 等明天從首頁下來之後，你可以修改主帖了，加個前綴【梅雨潭的愛】，會加入活動合輯，你也會得到獎品的：） -beautifulwind- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/18/2021 postreply 14:22:54

• Thank you, will do :-) -以美麗回答一切- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/18/2021 postreply 14:45:05

• 寫得真好啊！淚中帶笑：） -愛聽歌的奧黛麗- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/18/2021 postreply 16:31:47

• :-) -以美麗回答一切- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/19/2021 postreply 05:40:46