--- if "flow" is correct in this context. Maybe "melt"?
---if it would be better to replace "still unravel" with "yet to unravel"?
This is a wonderful poem. Sorry for the nitpicking.
--- if "flow" is correct in this context. Maybe "melt"?
---if it would be better to replace "still unravel" with "yet to unravel"?
This is a wonderful poem. Sorry for the nitpicking.
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那個 yet to unravel, 太好的建議了, 雖然跟still 意思差不多,但這個讀起來很有節奏樂感,滿口生香, 采用了
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多謝兩字師!:)
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