--- if "flow" is correct in this context. Maybe "melt"?
---if it would be better to replace "still unravel" with "yet to unravel"?
This is a wonderful poem. Sorry for the nitpicking.
--- if "flow" is correct in this context. Maybe "melt"?
---if it would be better to replace "still unravel" with "yet to unravel"?
This is a wonderful poem. Sorry for the nitpicking.
• 那個 yet to unravel, 太好的建議了, 雖然跟still 意思差不多,但這個讀起來很有節奏樂感,滿口生香, 采用了 -天玉之- ♀ (326 bytes) () 05/16/2021 postreply 16:09:09
• 多謝兩字師!:) -天玉之- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/16/2021 postreply 18:30:02