Nice writing! Keep it up:)

There are a few grammer errors that we non-native speakers tend to make. :)

1, I love the movie so much, and I watched it at least 3 times so far I guess.

I loved this movie so much that I have watched it at least 3 times already.

2, Eileen Chang’s story was ended with the marriage of “白流蘇'' and “範柳原”.

Eileen Chang’s story ends with the marriage of “白流蘇'' and “範柳原”.

3, But I can tell both stories left lots of imagination to viewers.

But both stories left lots of room for imagination to the viewers.

4, That’s why we both love and hate towards life itself I guess.
 I guess that’s why we both love and hate life.
 

Thank you for giving me the opportunity to learn how to write better too!:) 

I hope someone else can chip in some thoughts as well. 

Have a nice weekend!

 

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