Well written. I like it.

Inspired by your poem, 我學習寫幾句，明天要給資本家打工就不讓寫了，哈

Since the last time the young woman sobbed her farewell 
Waves of passion in her heart have surged to a new height
See, the man's bewitching sweat still glistens on her shoulders
Though he is gone far away
See, the loving words, just spoken from her silent lips,
And powered by her youthful breath,
Fly from sea to sea, fly from land to land
Fly to the full moon and fly to the hot sun
Echoing in the entire universe

O, dear young lady, did you hear a beseeching cry:
"Please go swim in the sea, wash off his sweat, and enjoy fish's company
Go loaf on the grass, stretch your voluptuous limbs in the wind
Go climb the mountain, breathe the unpolluted air 
And go gaze upon the azure sky, and bathe yourself in the sun"
O, dear young lady, on the Nature paved road
Is your heart freed from the invisible love,
And are you seeing another man walking towards you
Ready to stoke the fire with his strong hands?

 

 

 

 

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• wow, wow -Flyingstraw- ♀ (269 bytes) () 11/29/2015 postreply 17:23:06

• 謝謝。不貼了：）你的詩給了我靈感。等以後有時間繼續學習：） -youdecide- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/29/2015 postreply 19:22:52

• 即興賦詩，寫得真好。 -斕婷- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/02/2015 postreply 11:44:42

• 斕婷, 謝謝鼓勵。never too old to learn:) -youdecide- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/05/2015 postreply 18:28:13