Riptide

本帖於 2016-02-17 19:58:12 時間, 由普通用戶 Flyingstraw 編輯

Riptide (August 25)

 

I tried to reach the other shore
wishing to reach you

I sank into the water
not realizing what pulled me down below

The voice was floating
quickly drowned before memory sets

Sun rises
Sun sets
Deep inside that shadow hides

Nothing happened
Nothing gone
Nothing will change the world around

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生動形象的小詩,若配上你的朗誦就更好了。 -~葉子~- 給 ~葉子~ 發送悄悄話 ~葉子~ 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/25/2015 postreply 12:45:31

TKS ...might later on -Flyingstraw- 給 Flyingstraw 發送悄悄話 Flyingstraw 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/25/2015 postreply 19:39:33

A well-written poem. Happy Labor Day to you. -婉蕠- 給 婉蕠 發送悄悄話 婉蕠 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 09/07/2015 postreply 11:34:34

TKS. Same to you. -Flyingstraw- 給 Flyingstraw 發送悄悄話 Flyingstraw 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 09/07/2015 postreply 14:01:50

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