very good.

來源: y10601 於 2015-06-17 13:16:22 [] [舊帖] [給我悄悄話] 閱讀數 : (185 bytes)

But I can't heard your TUM-ta. Have you seen the movie "Dangerous Beauty"? if you happened to see it, play attention the iambic pattern also, not just the rhythm.

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