I see that you put a lot of work in the translation

來源: 馬下人 於 2015-02-20 20:37:29 [] [博客] [舊帖] [給我悄悄話] 閱讀數 : (634 bytes)
回答: Here is one I tried before 由 李唐 於 2015-02-20 13:33:16

I believe that there is an omission of an 'in' in below line and I do not think one can use only one 'in' for both the weather and the location at the same time. If I am right the line should have 11 syllables.

"In last year's weather and (in) the pavi'ion old"

I do not know the rules and the practice of compacting a word. Can it be used to any noun(pavi'ion)?

Please do not misunderstand me. I am not picky. I made more mistakes. I just try to say that using the same number of syllables and the same meters in a translation is so hard if it is ever possible.

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