你寫的是take a look it later

小地方也是要注意的。寫完文章自己讀一遍，看哪些地方不通順再改一改，如果你真想提高英語的話而不是把這裏當作發泄情緒的地方。

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• those not thoese. place not please -dandelion1- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/08/2014 postreply 11:06:42

• Come on! She knows that, only some typoes in rushed writings. -hammerheadshark- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/08/2014 postreply 17:47:05

• I knew, Wolf :D -dandelion1- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/09/2014 postreply 07:23:41

• Hello, dandelion1. I am a shark in this forum. :D -hammerheadshark- ♀ (102 bytes) () 10/09/2014 postreply 19:25:53

• I found this forum a nice place. -dandelion1- ♂ (42 bytes) () 10/10/2014 postreply 08:55:58