朗讀練習, 望指教：Cheetah

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讀的時候挺滿意，聽錄音時就覺得問題不少了。望各位不吝賜教，我想看看和我自己的感覺是否一致。原視頻中無文稿，以下是我自己從youtube視頻（Why you can't outrun a cheetah）中聽來的：


The cheetah is undisputed king of
speed, holding natures's land speed record for 10 million consecutive
years. It reaches top speeds of 75 miles per hour. But its accelation
is what's  truely impressive. It leaves most of the world's fastest
super cars in its dust. The Ferrari , Lamborghini, or Mclaren is no
match. 0-60 in 3 seconds or just 3 strides. Aerodynamics and light
weight frame enable this astonishing accelaration. Weighing in only
125 lbs, its muscles don't have to carry much weight, translating
into its accelaraton instead. And the small head, flatened rib cage
and slender legs minimize air resistance.

Once it reaches top speed, unique
design features sustain the speed. The cheetah has extremely flexible
spine as well as pivoting hips and shoulder blades that are not
attached to the collar bone. This allows the front and rear legs to
stretch further apart when fully extended and move closer together
when the feet come under its body increasing the cheetah's stride
length to an amazing 25 feet. The cheetah moves so quickly that its
feet spend more time in the air than on the ground, twice during each
stride having all 4 feet off the ground at the same time. In a high
speed chase, the long muscular tail works as a stabilizing rodder.
Even its feet are modified for speed. Unlike other cats, cheetahs'
foot pads are hard and flat like tire treads and their short blunt
claws do not retract completely like lions and lepoards. They are
designed for grip like the cleats on the track field. These
modifications provide cheetah with increased traction, fast sharp
turns.

 

 

 

 

 

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• 加上 text了，你可以再進去看看。多謝鼓勵。 -winterstorm9- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/30/2014 postreply 05:47:24

• 可以讀成mil, 但我可能讀得太重了。 -winterstorm9- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/30/2014 postreply 05:59:34

• Excellent ! -Marauders- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/30/2014 postreply 06:02:05

• 謝鼓勵。我的語調還要下很大工夫。 -winterstorm9- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/30/2014 postreply 06:09:46

• 您來求意見,說說我的印象,不對請見諒!總體感覺非常好,每個單詞發音都很好. -hopeinhope- ♀ (332 bytes) () 08/30/2014 postreply 06:42:17

• 你的點評很到位，這正是我需要努力的地方。多謝！ -winterstorm9- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/30/2014 postreply 06:44:31

• 嘿嘿，亂評兩句比讀一段文章容易。應該向你學習。 -hopeinhope- ♀ (69 bytes) () 08/30/2014 postreply 10:07:02

• 你的繞口令讀得很絕。聲音也像是在哪聽過。 -winterstorm9- ♂ (39 bytes) () 08/30/2014 postreply 15:10:11

• 我不混歌壇啊。向你學習,我也錄一個cheetah. -hopeinhope- ♀ (2371 bytes) () 09/02/2014 postreply 07:51:31

• What a familiar voice! It's as good as before, Sis :) -dandelion1- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/02/2014 postreply 08:33:43

• 好嘛，你從哪裏蹦出來的？ -hopeinhope- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/02/2014 postreply 08:50:14

• hahaha, I am your follower :) -dandelion1- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/02/2014 postreply 08:57:26

• 熱烈歡迎浮出水麵。 -hopeinhope- ♀ (39 bytes) () 09/02/2014 postreply 09:41:40

• 我本來也想找你的，可是你換了名字，醬哥名字沒怎麽變，一下給我找到了。 -dandelion1- ♂ (35 bytes) () 09/02/2014 postreply 10:12:01

• 我喜歡這裏的氛圍，不像以前那個地方。 -dandelion1- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/02/2014 postreply 09:00:47

• 這裏確實是好地方。我有大開眼界的感覺 -hopeinhope- ♀ (72 bytes) () 09/02/2014 postreply 09:27:23

• Well, well well -dandelion1- ♂ (103 bytes) () 09/02/2014 postreply 10:32:27

• 流利自信抑揚頓挫。我猜對了。 -winterstorm9- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/02/2014 postreply 08:39:07

• 順便，此處的編輯器可以嵌入鏈接，點”切換”即可找到。 -winterstorm9- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/02/2014 postreply 08:51:34

• Thanks,我琢磨一下。 -hopeinhope- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/02/2014 postreply 08:53:11

• 幾乎是用母語讀的感覺。想請教一下：語速怎樣會練得如此之快呢？ -淋雨- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/03/2014 postreply 09:40:08

• 您過講了。帖子沉到第二頁，沒注意還有人看。您可把我問住了。 -hopeinhope- ♀ (597 bytes) () 09/04/2014 postreply 05:32:27

• 語言模仿能力是一種天賦，you are rich at this. -dandelion1- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/04/2014 postreply 08:05:17

• 她練過繞口令，讀得很清楚，應當有所幫助。你可以聽聽。 -winterstorm9- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/04/2014 postreply 11:32:54

• 讀的很好！謝謝分享：） -南山鬆- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/30/2014 postreply 10:00:39

• 謝鼓勵！共同提高。 -winterstorm9- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/30/2014 postreply 15:11:27

• 讀得有氣勢,很專業！想起以前京北也讀得這麽好！ -京燕花園- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/30/2014 postreply 12:19:56

• 謝版主鼓勵。新來乍到，不知哪位是京北大俠？ -winterstorm9- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/30/2014 postreply 15:14:37

• Jingbeiboy, we haven't seen him for a long time. -京燕花園- ♀ (132 bytes) () 08/30/2014 postreply 18:27:44

• 多謝你提供的鏈接，省了我不少時間。京北這篇文章不易讀好，感覺他的連讀挺老練地道。 -winterstorm9- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/31/2014 postreply 03:19:32

• 我也是初來乍到.不知道你注意到沒有,總壇右邊匯總鏈接,各路高手如雲,寫作,翻譯,朗誦,語音，演唱，配音 -hopeinhope- ♀ (175 bytes) () 09/02/2014 postreply 04:03:15

• 注意到了，不過還沒一一細看。與你有同感，喜歡這裏的氛圍。 -winterstorm9- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/02/2014 postreply 05:08:31

• 聽了京北以前的那段配音，有耳目一新之感。 -winterstorm9- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/02/2014 postreply 05:14:58

• Very good indeed! 相當不錯的美語朗讀，那些美語特點的 -anke_ba- ♂ (85 bytes) () 08/30/2014 postreply 17:03:56

• 多謝讚揚。聽過你的錄音，語調方麵還要向你學習。 -winterstorm9- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/30/2014 postreply 17:26:53

• Wow, 讀得真是好極了。 歡迎winterstorm常來美語壇。 -珈玥- ♀ (529 bytes) () 08/30/2014 postreply 19:15:13

• 多謝褒揚。確實還有不少需要提高的地方。 -winterstorm9- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/31/2014 postreply 03:09:33

• 不錯，又上一層樓 -淋雨- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/31/2014 postreply 20:34:29

• 多謝！ -winterstorm9- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/01/2014 postreply 03:34:45

• Wow, great! -小公主- ♀ (61 bytes) () 09/01/2014 postreply 16:25:23

• Keep practicing. There is no other way around. You will improve -winterstorm9- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/01/2014 postreply 17:09:40

• 醬哥讀得還是那麽好。語調上要是能抑揚一些就更好了。這樣給人的感覺不會那麽硬。：） -dandelion1- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/02/2014 postreply 08:36:21

• 世界真小！網絡世界更小！ -winterstorm9- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/02/2014 postreply 09:04:14

• 哇，地道的美語，歡迎您常來哈. -~葉子~- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/02/2014 postreply 16:46:12

• 版主過獎。一定常來討教。 -winterstorm9- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/02/2014 postreply 18:53:10