朗讀練習-Jerry decided to buy a gun, 請多提意見。 謝謝

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Jerry Baldwin was 30 years old. He was the manager of a pizza restaurant. He lived in an apartment about one mile north of the restaurant. He walked to and from work. When it was raining, he took the bus.
Jerry loved gangster movies. When a new one came out, he would go to the theater and watch the new movie three or four times. Then, when it went to video, Jerry would buy the video at Barney's Video Store. Jerry had a home collection of over 1,000 gangster videos. Old ones, new ones, color, black and white, English, Spanish, Japanese--he loved them all. He could tell you the name of the movie, the director, the stars, and the plot. Did you say you liked "Pulp Fiction"? Well, Jerry would rattle off all the details of that movie. And then he would invite you to his place to watch it some time. He was a nice guy. 
Jerry finally decided that he would like to own a gun, just like the gangsters. So he saved his money for a couple of years. Then he went to a gun store and bought a used .38 caliber revolver for $300. While there, he also bought a couple of boxes of ammunition. The following Saturday morning, he went to the gun club to practice with his new revolver. He was in the club for only 10 minutes when he accidentally dropped his pistol. The gun went off, and the bullet went into Jerry's right knee.
Jerry now walks with a limp and a cane, just like some gangsters.

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It‘s too bad for Jerry. -南山鬆- 給 南山鬆 發送悄悄話 南山鬆 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/07/2014 postreply 17:21:48

不錯。再注意一下語音語調。把每個單詞的語調升降都標出來。 -beautifulwind- 給 beautifulwind 發送悄悄話 beautifulwind 的博客首頁 (180 bytes) () 08/07/2014 postreply 19:41:52

Oh, poor Jerry. -~葉子~- 給 ~葉子~ 發送悄悄話 ~葉子~ 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/08/2014 postreply 18:54:43

Poor Jerry! He made his wish the hard way.Nice reading~~ -京燕花園- 給 京燕花園 發送悄悄話 京燕花園 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/09/2014 postreply 13:50:34

元音有提高的空間,大部分 i 都沒有發滿,比如 right 聽起來像 ret。 -1sthiker- 給 1sthiker 發送悄悄話 1sthiker 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/17/2014 postreply 05:44:36

謝謝! 我也覺得我有很多問題. LEFT and RIGHT 不分。 -新民- 給 新民 發送悄悄話 新民 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/17/2014 postreply 19:48:01

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