Undisturbed

Far away from the bustle of a populous city
A man sat in a corner, between a mountain and a river
Undisturbed, watching the ebb and flow of the wrinkled water
How did he get there, being unclothed in the air?
What was he pondering on, life, love, lore or nature's law?
Didn't he see the dark dense masses in the sky
Or hear the pantings and pipings in the woods?
Perhaps he pondered on not what I pondered on
He saw not what I saw and he heard not what I heard
O the most unvanquishable! The man who freed himself
From art, literature, science, philosophy, power and passion

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• 寫得真好,猶如素描畫: a man, mountain, river, pondering on... -紫君- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/30/2014 postreply 20:09:25

• Thank you! -justlook- ♂ (109 bytes) () 06/30/2014 postreply 20:47:26

• Yes, a poetic picture. -聚曦亭- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/01/2014 postreply 00:20:37

• Thank you. I still need to improve it. -justlook- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/01/2014 postreply 07:54:56

• beautiful! -好學又好問- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/01/2014 postreply 07:15:24

• Thank you for your encouragement. -justlook- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/01/2014 postreply 07:55:46

• Nicely made. Thank you. -馬下人- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/01/2014 postreply 07:49:02

• Thanks! I am learning to write. -justlook- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/01/2014 postreply 07:56:33

• This poem mades a good lyric for a song~~~ -京燕花園- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/01/2014 postreply 09:00:18

• wow, interesting. I am impressed. Thanks! -justlook- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/01/2014 postreply 09:19:27

• He was hopeless:). Thank you. -justlook- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/01/2014 postreply 11:33:13

• Yes, a poetic picture. Good description! -~葉子~- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/02/2014 postreply 20:32:51