Undisturbed

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Far away from the bustle of a populous city
A man sat in a corner, between a mountain and a river
Undisturbed, watching the ebb and flow of the wrinkled water
How did he get there, being unclothed in the air?
What was he pondering on, life, love, lore or nature's law?
Didn't he see the dark dense masses in the sky
Or hear the pantings and pipings in the woods?
Perhaps he pondered on not what I pondered on
He saw not what I saw and he heard not what I heard
O the most unvanquishable! The man who freed himself
From art, literature, science, philosophy, power and passion

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寫得真好,猶如素描畫: a man, mountain, river, pondering on... -紫君- 給 紫君 發送悄悄話 紫君 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 06/30/2014 postreply 20:09:25

Thank you! -justlook- 給 justlook 發送悄悄話 (109 bytes) () 06/30/2014 postreply 20:47:26

Yes, a poetic picture. -聚曦亭- 給 聚曦亭 發送悄悄話 (0 bytes) () 07/01/2014 postreply 00:20:37

Thank you. I still need to improve it. -justlook- 給 justlook 發送悄悄話 (0 bytes) () 07/01/2014 postreply 07:54:56

beautiful! -好學又好問- 給 好學又好問 發送悄悄話 好學又好問 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 07/01/2014 postreply 07:15:24

Thank you for your encouragement. -justlook- 給 justlook 發送悄悄話 (0 bytes) () 07/01/2014 postreply 07:55:46

Nicely made. Thank you. -馬下人- 給 馬下人 發送悄悄話 馬下人 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 07/01/2014 postreply 07:49:02

Thanks! I am learning to write. -justlook- 給 justlook 發送悄悄話 (0 bytes) () 07/01/2014 postreply 07:56:33

This poem mades a good lyric for a song~~~ -京燕花園- 給 京燕花園 發送悄悄話 京燕花園 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 07/01/2014 postreply 09:00:18

wow, interesting. I am impressed. Thanks! -justlook- 給 justlook 發送悄悄話 (0 bytes) () 07/01/2014 postreply 09:19:27

He was hopeless:). Thank you. -justlook- 給 justlook 發送悄悄話 (0 bytes) () 07/01/2014 postreply 11:33:13

Yes, a poetic picture. Good description! -~葉子~- 給 ~葉子~ 發送悄悄話 ~葉子~ 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 07/02/2014 postreply 20:32:51

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