Good writing, very minor error from what I can tell.

來源: AprilMei 於 2013-10-08 20:47:42 [檔案] [博客] [舊帖] [給我悄悄話] 本文已被閱讀：次 (1205 bytes)

made he think should be made him think

and then I felt relieved to realize that what he said was 4 to 6 minutes: "that" can be removed.

Lucky should be luckily

"that" after lucky should be removed.

too many "that"

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