It's been a while since my last visit and I stumbled at your first sentence, and I feel I need to say something.
"Today at lunch time at the cafeteria in my working place my co-worker Maria and I sat together, but neither she or I ate a thing beside chatting and having pop and coffee."
1. You should have better way to reorganize "Today", "at lunch time", "at the cafeteria", "in my working place", my eyes are quite strained just to look at those phrases.
2. Why "but"?
3. "neither" pairs with "nor"
4. "beside" is wrongly used. Consider "except".
5. "chatting" has nothing to do with "neither ...a thing." It shouldn't be there. Start a new sentence for that.
6, Not writing related, how does it taste like drinking pop and coffee? :)
I may leave the site for a long time again. Keep writing. See you.
"Today at lunch time at the cafeteria in my working place my co-worker Maria and I sat together, but neither she or I ate a thing beside chatting and having pop and coffee."
1. You should have better way to reorganize "Today", "at lunch time", "at the cafeteria", "in my working place", my eyes are quite strained just to look at those phrases.
2. Why "but"?
3. "neither" pairs with "nor"
4. "beside" is wrongly used. Consider "except".
5. "chatting" has nothing to do with "neither ...a thing." It shouldn't be there. Start a new sentence for that.
6, Not writing related, how does it taste like drinking pop and coffee? :)
I may leave the site for a long time again. Keep writing. See you.
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