Thank you for the encouragement!
Also, to share with you some comments from a native speaker:
1. the title should be a Layperson, not layman since I am not a man. hehe.
2.Some sentences are too informal. "esp." should be spelled out. etc.
• "layman" should be acceptable -bmdn- ♀ (38 bytes) () 05/19/2013 postreply 19:17:43