Thank you very much, DN!

回答: Well writtenbmdn2013-05-19 16:40:11

That's exactly how I feel. 
Thank you for the encouragement!

Also, to share with you some comments from a native speaker:
1. the title should be a Layperson, not layman since I am not a man. hehe.
2.Some sentences are too informal. "esp." should be spelled out. etc.

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"layman" should be acceptable -bmdn- 給 bmdn 發送悄悄話 (38 bytes) () 05/19/2013 postreply 19:17:43

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