my small change to your version

Lying flat in a desolate village, no self pity

Still think about guarding country's frontier border

Listening to the sounds of wind and rain to the end of night

Into dream I am riding an armored horse and going across the frozen river

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• should thank you first, for the last sentence, i changed again -horse625- ♂ (68 bytes) () 04/23/2013 postreply 10:30:52

• in dream-出不了意味 -horse625- ♂ (66 bytes) () 04/24/2013 postreply 12:24:35