Good writing, tough experience

衝浪潛水員 · 2013-03-16 02:26:38Z

Good writing, tough experience簡介

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回答: My shingles outbreak 由 Marauders 於 2013-03-15 19:37:19

Maybe, try to go and see the doctor earlier?

A couple of correction suggestions:

" This thing is like a ghost sticking to my bone." ==> was

"I feel like invincible" ==> felt

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