Sounds like a tour brochure

本帖於 2013-02-11 08:12:26 時間, 由版主 林貝卡 編輯
回答: [加隊] The Allure of the North--Wonder Lakerockcurrent2013-02-10 19:58:12

Well written, but a few unconventional usages. "North America" is used more than "Northern America". In the beginning you said that Denali is the best in the world but quickly changed that to the best place in the state (of Alasaka).

"Plenty of opportunities".

"Pristine geography" is used more than 3 times. I'm also not sure if this is a valid combination. I've read "pristine" used with land, soil, forest, water, lake, etc., which are tangible objects. I don't think "geography", a more conceptual identity, can be "pristine".

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Haha, it is a propaganda for the coming tour to Alaska! -rockcurrent- 給 rockcurrent 發送悄悄話 rockcurrent 的博客首頁 (19 bytes) () 02/11/2013 postreply 07:44:07

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