Let’s lay down some ground rules.
1. You should continue to be relentless on spellings, tense and pronouns, because they are indefensible. I truly admire you on this.
2. Choice of words. You are welcome to point out better choices to enrich my own vocabulary. Most of the time, this is the part I want to hear from you.
3. Grammar. There are several levels of grammar. Again, please stand firm on the basic level of grammar. Higher level, debatable part, you are welcome to express what you know, but we are not going to fight over what is allowed or not allowed. To me, writing is a form of art and I am willing to try anything.
4. Writing structure, especially, logical flow of the writing, such as what is missing or what should be there to avoid misunderstanding. I desperately need input on this aspect. Trust your instinct, for anything that you don't comprehend, point it out. Then we discuss it.
I am looking forward to your bricks. I guess I am fully recovered from the last bruises. :)