好詩，好樂，好聲音，好朗誦

但願我的好翻譯。

You receive me or not, regardless
There still is me
No sad, nor please

You crave for me or not, regardless
There still is passion
No near, nor far

You love me or not, regardless
There still is love
No more, nor less

You follow me or not, regardless
There still is my hand in your hand
No loose, nor lax

Come into my arms
Or
Dwell me in your heart
Reticently we are amorous
Silently we are joyous

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• 讀了你的這版並貼出。謝謝大牛！ -beautifulwind- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/23/2012 postreply 18:37:07

• 回複：好詩，好樂，好聲音，好朗誦 -beautifulwind- ♀ (65 bytes) () 09/23/2012 postreply 19:05:33

• 我覺得可以寫：No near -bmdn- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/24/2012 postreply 06:27:57