莎士比亞《Venus and Adonis》翻譯 - 011

Forced to content, but never to obey,

Panting he lies and breatheth in her face;

She feedeth on the steam as on a prey,

And calls it heavenly moisture, air of grace;

Wishing her cheeks were gardens full of flowers,

So they were dew'd with such distilling showers.

曲意迎合心不攏，

少年仰噓神女麵；

妖女采氣戲男寵，

單言神霧甘且甜；

奴願雙腮變花圃，

日開夜放承君露。

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• bmdn真有才華,我一直在跟讀你的翻譯係列,既學英語又學中文。 -紫君- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/05/2012 postreply 13:17:57

• 多謝表揚和鼓勵。 -bmdn- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/06/2012 postreply 08:04:52

• bmdn的確厲害。沒有譯文直接看原文我會感到吃力。 -onceuponatime- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/05/2012 postreply 18:54:50

• 太感謝了！ -bmdn- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/06/2012 postreply 08:05:38

• 出師一表真名世 千載誰堪伯仲間. 崇拜！ -sportwoman- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/06/2012 postreply 08:07:27

• 如果是說我的話，不敢承受。高人有的是。 -bmdn- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/06/2012 postreply 08:38:07