一點建議供參考!

又聽了幾遍, 大體上很好, 節奏,快慢都很合適.很順耳的說,能背這樣有自信,已經很了不起了.

個別的發音我就不提了,並沒有影響理解的都是好的發音, 你的整體語調把握非常成功.

下麵是我根據文章內容分了段,給了些建議,另外說的時候, 把自己的要表達的意思和意念一同容進去.

一家之言, 今供參考!

Several cases have been reported in Russia recently of people who can read and detect colors with their fingers, and even see through solid doors and walls.

One case concerns an eleven-year-old schoolgirl, Vera Petrova, who has normal vision but who can also perceive things give a big pause (with different parts of her skin, and through solid walls) could be grouped together. This ability was first noticed by her father. One day she came into his office and happened to put her hands on the door of a locked safe.Suddenly she asked her father why he kept so many old newspapers locked away there, and even described the way they were done up in bundles. Vera's curious talent was brought to the notice of a scientific research institute in the town of Ulyanovsk, near where she lives(could be done in a lower tone and quicker pace), and in April she was given a series of tests by a special commission of (the Ministry of Health of the Russian Federal Republic)group them together. During these tests she was able to read a newspaper through an opaque screen and, stranger still, by moving her elbow over a child's game of Lotto she was able to describe the figures and colours printed on it; and, in another instance, wearing stockings and slippers, to make out with her foot give a pause(the outlines and colours of a picture hidden under a carpet) group them together. Other experiments showed that her knees and shoulders had a similar sensitivity. Give a big pause here.

During all these tests Vera was blindfold; and, indeed, except when blindfold she lacked the ability to perceive things with her skin. It was also found that although she could perceive things with her fingers this ability ceased the moment her hands were wet.

      

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