Your effort really paid off. The use of your voice is completely different. You sounds more like a mature woman now.
I can sense strong influence of VOA. Is it the trend here to pay special attention to each every word? I'm not sure I like that. The flow of the sentences is more important for me. In order to utter each word in its absolute precision, you might loose the flow. The use of stress in a sentence sounds kind of even for me.Sorry for being overly picky. Overall, it's really impressive!
