My first Sonnet Exercise

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Shall I not bring home the chocolate cake?
I 've been educated not to waste

luggage has been packed like a hippo, not fake.

The flight won't wait,  I 'd better make  haste.

 

I ask  the front desk  about the bus routine,

And the girl says it is coming fast.

Seeing their restaurant ad with poutine,

Reminds me of my unfinished breakfast.

But I  don't want to put on weight.

Maybe I will just have the cake saved?
My seat number is 16F which is eight plus eight,
Sitting next to me, is a man with bear shaved.

 


So long Toronto! The vigorous city, my fave,
what's left of me are the memories my family gave.

 

Shakespeare's Sonnet #18


Shall I compare thee to a summer's day?
Thou art more lovely and more temperate.
Rough winds do shake the darling buds of May,
And summer's lease hath all too short a date.

Sometime too hot the eye of heaven shines,
And often is his gold complexion dimmed;
And every fair from fair sometime declines,
By chance, or nature's changing course, untrimmed;

But thy eternal summer shall not fade,
Nor lose possession of that fair thou owest,
Nor shall death brag thou wanderest in his shade,
When in eternal lines to time thou growest.

So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this gives life to thee.

by William Shakespeare

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Thanks in advance for giving me some advice! -sportwoman- 給 sportwoman 發送悄悄話 sportwoman 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 06/09/2012 postreply 20:46:15

流暢自然。向吳總督學習英文和數學。不知總督何時開文藝複興和十九世紀英國文學課。 -youknowmyheart- 給 youknowmyheart 發送悄悄話 (0 bytes) () 06/09/2012 postreply 23:12:19

能來這裏跟各位老師學習是我的最大的榮幸,多謝路過師兄鼓勵! -sportwoman- 給 sportwoman 發送悄悄話 sportwoman 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 06/10/2012 postreply 04:40:25

你是這裏的老師,我們都是學生。向你學習。 -youknowmyheart- 給 youknowmyheart 發送悄悄話 (0 bytes) () 06/10/2012 postreply 09:09:22

我可能比你老,但當不了您老師啊。:) -sportwoman- 給 sportwoman 發送悄悄話 sportwoman 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 06/10/2012 postreply 09:21:24

Nice! -hammerheadshark- 給 hammerheadshark 發送悄悄話 (41 bytes) () 06/09/2012 postreply 23:32:03

多謝鯊魚兄!genuflect! -sportwoman- 給 sportwoman 發送悄悄話 sportwoman 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 06/10/2012 postreply 04:42:48

牛! -beautifulwind- 給 beautifulwind 發送悄悄話 beautifulwind 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 06/09/2012 postreply 23:43:46

美女! 讓我欲眼望穿,不知道何故,真看不到你照片。 -sportwoman- 給 sportwoman 發送悄悄話 sportwoman 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 06/10/2012 postreply 04:44:57

連不是美女的,個人戶口裏我自己的照片也看不見了。 -sportwoman- 給 sportwoman 發送悄悄話 sportwoman 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 06/10/2012 postreply 07:53:37

柴女,寫的栩栩如生! -yingyudidida- 給 yingyudidida 發送悄悄話 yingyudidida 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 06/10/2012 postreply 10:28:54

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