跟Bill學,我也讀anyone lived in a pretty how town by E. E. Cummings

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anyone lived in a pretty how town
(with up so floating many bells down)
spring summer autumn winter
he sang his didn't he danced his did

Women and men(both little and small)
cared for anyone not at all
they sowed their isn't they reaped their same|
sun moon stars rain

children guessed(but only a few
and down they forgot as up they grew
autumn winter spring summer)
that noone loved him more by more

when by now and tree by leaf
she laughed his joy she cried his grief
bird by snow and stir by still
anyone's any was all to her

someones married their everyones
laughed their cryings and did their dance
(sleep wake hope and then)they
said their nevers they slept their dream

stars rain sun moon
(and only the snow can begin to explain
how children are apt to forget to remember
with up so floating many bells down)

one day anyone died i guess
(and noone stooped to kiss his face)
busy folk buried them side by side
little by little and was by was

all by all and deep by deep
and more by more they dream their sleep
noone and anyone earth by april
wish by spirit and if by yes.

Women and men(both dong and ding)
summer autumn winter spring
reaped their sowing and went their came
sun moon stars rain

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先占個座。我正開始讀900句。爭取今天貼上來。。舌頭瓣蒜的不行。:) -beautifulwind- 給 beautifulwind 發送悄悄話 beautifulwind 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 04/17/2012 postreply 14:02:18

我回家在聽。 -yingyudidida- 給 yingyudidida 發送悄悄話 yingyudidida 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 04/17/2012 postreply 14:31:14

進步神速啊,我就聽除了小微提到的 sang:he sang his didn't -yingyudidida- 給 yingyudidida 發送悄悄話 yingyudidida 的博客首頁 (29 bytes) () 04/17/2012 postreply 15:57:17

謝謝Bro鼓勵! -非文學青年- 給 非文學青年 發送悄悄話 非文學青年 的博客首頁 (43 bytes) () 04/17/2012 postreply 22:14:57

文青讀的真好!小磚渣 -同學小薇- 給 同學小薇 發送悄悄話 同學小薇 的博客首頁 (428 bytes) () 04/17/2012 postreply 15:12:28

謝謝薇薇!好磚! -非文學青年- 給 非文學青年 發送悄悄話 非文學青年 的博客首頁 (73 bytes) () 04/17/2012 postreply 22:16:30

羨慕啊羨慕!!文青你水平漲得太快了。。 -beautifulwind- 給 beautifulwind 發送悄悄話 beautifulwind 的博客首頁 (1657 bytes) () 04/17/2012 postreply 16:37:48

排隊羨慕,美風很長時間不見你出來示範朗讀了。 -bingli- 給 bingli 發送悄悄話 bingli 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 04/17/2012 postreply 16:48:26

主要是很長時間不讀,今天一讀,難聽得把自己惡心著了。。:) -beautifulwind- 給 beautifulwind 發送悄悄話 beautifulwind 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 04/17/2012 postreply 16:49:52

感謝美風,也謝謝冰粒鼓勵!ng還是發不到位,其實我的n也沒有到位,蒙混過關,嘻嘻。 -非文學青年- 給 非文學青年 發送悄悄話 非文學青年 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 04/17/2012 postreply 22:17:50

Very nice! -NewVoice- 給 NewVoice 發送悄悄話 NewVoice 的博客首頁 (232 bytes) () 04/17/2012 postreply 17:22:40

謝謝姐姐!恩,姐姐說的對,moon和explain是n發得不到位造成的,我覺得。 -非文學青年- 給 非文學青年 發送悄悄話 非文學青年 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 04/17/2012 postreply 22:18:49

好好聽,發音準,節奏感好,象給孩子念的童謠 :) -lilac09- 給 lilac09 發送悄悄話 lilac09 的博客首頁 (30 bytes) () 04/17/2012 postreply 17:29:47

謝謝mm!恩,explain是要濁化才對。 -非文學青年- 給 非文學青年 發送悄悄話 非文學青年 的博客首頁 (105 bytes) () 04/17/2012 postreply 22:21:12

Enjoyable! -EnLearner- 給 EnLearner 發送悄悄話 EnLearner 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 04/17/2012 postreply 19:58:55

謝謝愚公! -非文學青年- 給 非文學青年 發送悄悄話 非文學青年 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 04/17/2012 postreply 22:21:34

讀得好。 可能“oo"的發音在”moon“和”stoop“裏發的短了點。 -jingbeiboy- 給 jingbeiboy 發送悄悄話 jingbeiboy 的博客首頁 (40 bytes) () 04/18/2012 postreply 05:39:19

謝謝京北,說得對,我回頭聽了聽,尤其stoop太短了。 -非文學青年- 給 非文學青年 發送悄悄話 非文學青年 的博客首頁 (82 bytes) () 04/18/2012 postreply 06:44:45

不止是發音啊?這節奏,語調也都這麽美了! -toast2011- 給 toast2011 發送悄悄話 (81 bytes) () 04/18/2012 postreply 09:42:42

嗬嗬,謝謝吐司鼓勵!還是會有時候喘不上來氣 -非文學青年- 給 非文學青年 發送悄悄話 非文學青年 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 04/18/2012 postreply 12:00:54

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