MEIFENG HAPPY BIRTHDAY--- 遲到的祝福

來到美壇是因為美風貼的聽歌練聽力,有幸知道很多大牛! 聽歌有了長進,盡管聽力還要努力.知道MF生日,特送上祝福.

MEIFENG HAPPY BIRTHDAY

Moon sits on the shoulder of a rocky mountain,
Expecting a shooting star to bless Windy's wish,
Imaging the stars are candle lights shining, 
Far from an angel's party will never finish.
  
Evening breeze passes across snow-covered grass,
Night silence is his solely pace,  
Gasps in his breath disturb the wild peace,  
Hurrying to bring Windy a special bless.

Absorbed in the melody of a birthday song,
Piled up are the blessings so long,
Persons unknown could so well get along,
Yes, since we are listening your posted song.

Beyond the cheer, encouragement and sadness,
Imperishable are your care and kindness,
Rings of "AiYa" shine your happiness, 
Travesty in "ShangBuQi" divulges your wild wittiness.

Hearing songs and music flow through the fiber,
Distance across mountain and plain could not hamper, 
A friend living afar beside a frozen river,
Yawns and stacks birthday bless for a pretty sister.

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• SF! -beautifulwind- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/08/2012 postreply 21:18:32

• 好SF (So Fast), 慢慢看了! -rockcurrent- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/08/2012 postreply 21:21:32

• 你真是天才啊!這麽快就寫了一首這麽好的E詩！ -beautifulwind- ♀ (307 bytes) () 03/08/2012 postreply 21:26:09

• Just on time! Nice poem! -走馬讀人- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/08/2012 postreply 21:21:15

• 謝走馬先生鑒定. -rockcurrent- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/08/2012 postreply 21:45:32

• Nice peom. 再祝美風生日快樂！ -EnLearner- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/08/2012 postreply 21:35:25

• 同祝美風生日快樂！ -rockcurrent- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/08/2012 postreply 21:47:45

• 謝謝愚公！謝謝current！ -beautifulwind- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/08/2012 postreply 21:48:44

• 你太牛了，每行的第一個字就是MEIFENG Happy Birthday啊。。感動。。 -beautifulwind- ♀ (153 bytes) () 03/08/2012 postreply 21:36:15

• 客氣了,石頭哥的祝福,盡管笑納! -rockcurrent- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/08/2012 postreply 22:02:44

• incretible! -小源- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/08/2012 postreply 22:10:37

• CO：incredible! -beautifulwind- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/08/2012 postreply 23:12:26

• 謝謝果醬! -rockcurrent- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/09/2012 postreply 08:44:32

• Rockcurrent rocks! -ntotl- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/08/2012 postreply 22:53:16

• CO：Rockcurrent rocks! -beautifulwind- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/08/2012 postreply 23:12:03

• 謝謝果醬! -rockcurrent- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/09/2012 postreply 08:43:59

• 好！美風麵子真大，well deserved！ -非文學青年- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/08/2012 postreply 23:10:31

• 謝謝文青的一直支持與鼓勵！ -beautifulwind- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/08/2012 postreply 23:11:48

• 哪裏？說到鼓勵和支持，你給我的是最多的。謝謝美風！ -非文學青年- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/08/2012 postreply 23:17:13

• 謝謝鑒定,你麵子也夠大的. -rockcurrent- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/09/2012 postreply 08:46:35

• OMG! it is so good! -sportwoman- ♀ (108 bytes) () 03/09/2012 postreply 05:59:10

• 謝謝鑒定,請提意見. -rockcurrent- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/09/2012 postreply 08:43:32

• What a wonderful poem. Happy birthday to beautifulwind. -斕婷- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/09/2012 postreply 06:23:43

• 謝謝斑竹！ -beautifulwind- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/09/2012 postreply 08:04:20

• 同謝Bacca置頂! -rockcurrent- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/09/2012 postreply 08:34:42

• Like your spontaneous and creative writing. -李唐- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/09/2012 postreply 07:03:43

• 謝謝果醬! -rockcurrent- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/09/2012 postreply 08:42:07

• 頂好詩，很有創意。同祝美風生日快樂~ -lilac09- ♀ (245 bytes) () 03/09/2012 postreply 07:06:11

• 謝謝lilac！也祝雙魚的你生日快樂！ -beautifulwind- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/09/2012 postreply 08:05:09

• Thanks, lilac, Typo: shine. Yarn is also a good word fits here! -rockcurrent- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/09/2012 postreply 08:31:47

• 頂原創，難得有這份心，同祝美風生日快樂。 -yingyudidida- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/09/2012 postreply 07:45:09

• 謝謝Bill。每次在我內心很脆弱的時候，current總是能來支持我。我也非常感激他。 -beautifulwind- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/09/2012 postreply 08:06:47

• 謝Bill鑒定. -rockcurrent- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/09/2012 postreply 08:33:19

• current 詩寫得好棒！ 熱心的美風 well deserved :-) -同學小薇- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/09/2012 postreply 08:40:38

• 謝謝小薇的永遠支持！ -beautifulwind- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/09/2012 postreply 08:42:56

• 謝謝小薇的大果醬! -rockcurrent- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/09/2012 postreply 08:48:26

• oops,晚來了些! 生日快樂! -tingfeng- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/09/2012 postreply 09:59:48

• 謝謝tingfeng！ -beautifulwind- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/09/2012 postreply 10:04:33

• Thanks for your support. -rockcurrent- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/09/2012 postreply 12:04:08

• very elegant, smooth and thoughtful poem. 即使yawn我也要把它背下來。。。 -whatday- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/09/2012 postreply 11:50:14

• Thanks for your nice comments. -rockcurrent- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/09/2012 postreply 12:03:13

• 詩人的評價總是更全麵。：） -beautifulwind- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/09/2012 postreply 15:42:16