wonderful！非常好聽，地道！

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回答: My first reading.Some comments, please. 由 hammerheadshark 於 2012-03-07 23:18:50

語感節奏真棒！

under，lunch，deep聽著有點off。有一兩處的t，d，我覺得發得有點重了。象下麵這個：

It knew the weather was too cold to travel.

Pure white snow and ice covered the Earth for as far as he could see.

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• Thank you! I will practise more on those words. -hammerheadshark- ♀ 給 hammerheadshark 發送悄悄話 (0 bytes) () 03/08/2012 postreply 20:49:14

請您先登陸，再發跟帖！