英譯漢

　　
　　
　　漢譯--釣魚詩
　　
　　A Break in the Line
　　
　　© Ryan S. Harvey
　　I walk up to the river and in it I peer.
　　So soothing is the water and crystal clear.
　　A slight wind from the west awakens the trees.
　　I watch as they dance in this sweet cool breeze.
　　Tired is the sun as it sinks in the sky.
　　Little time left so my best I must try.
　　I reach back with my arm then bring it down like a hammer.
　　
　　
　　Releasing my line, in the most graceful of manner.
　　Through the air my lure soars, what seems like a mile.
　　Evoking from me, a most pleasurable smile.
　　A perfect cast, a wonderful shot.
　　I see my bait slip flawlessly into the best of spots.
　　Slowly I reel taking in slack.
　　Just then an explosion, a vicious attack.
　　Hard I pull back.
　　Then from nowhere a snap.
　　The fish was gone to travel on.
　　An outing on the bank all gone wrong.
　　A 7 Dollar lure still in his lip.
　　I hang my head low holding my rod at my hip.
　　He got lucky this time, but not the next trip.
　　
　　 漢譯:
　　
　　昂首闊步釣魚郎
　　
　　全副武裝夠倜儻
　　
　　涼風習習樹婆娑
　　
　　太陽累倒河底躺
　　
　　帥哥心急釣大魚
　　
　　奮力拋杆好幾丈
　　
　　專業姿勢忒瀟灑
　　
　　好不容易有動靜
　　
　　從容慢拽不慌忙
　　
　　人算真不如天算
　　
　　壞魚咬餌逃夭夭
　　
　　七個大洋打水漂
　　
　　恨得帥哥牙癢癢
　　
　　無奈垂頭收行囊
　　
　　下次再找它算賬
譯： sportwoman

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• 嗬嗬，這個翻譯真給力，中文讀起來特來勁 ：）） -小源- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/06/2012 postreply 07:21:38

• 哦剛才斕婷那首詩呢？ -sportwoman- ♀ (97 bytes) () 03/06/2012 postreply 09:05:03

• 問候sportwoman，你翻譯的好流暢。 -斕婷- ♀ (207 bytes) () 03/06/2012 postreply 09:24:02

• 好詩！謝謝！：） -sportwoman- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/06/2012 postreply 10:13:25