A nice exercise. Thank you!

本帖於 2011-11-03 22:39:17 時間, 由普通用戶 非文學青年 編輯

 

You ask me if I love you
And I ( choke) on my reply
I'd rather hurt you honestly
Than ( mislead ) you with a
lie

And who am I to (judge) you
On what you say or do?
I'm only just (begining) to see the ( real ) you

And sometimes when we touch
The (honesty) too much
And I have to close my eyes and (lie)
I wanna hold you til I die
Til we both break down and cry
I wanna hold you till the fear (of ) me (subside)

( Romance  ) and all its (strategy )
( Leave  ) me (  battling ) with my( cry )
But through the ( years  )
Some
tenderness 
survives
I'm just another (rider)
Still
trapped ) within my truth
A ( hesitant  )
prize
( fighter  )
Still (trapped ) within my ( youth  )

And sometimes when we touch
The (honesty) too much
And I have to close my eyes and ( hide )
I wanna hold you til I die
Til we both break down and cry
I wanna hold you till the fear ( of ) me ( subside  )

At times I'd like to break you
And (drive   ) you to your ( knees  )
At times I'd like to break through
And hold you ( asleep  )

At times I understand you
And I know how hard you've tried
I've watched ( how ) love (mend ) you
And I've watched love pass you by

At times I think we're (
drifters )
Still searching for a
friend
A brother or a sister
But then the
passion (flare) again

And sometimes when we touch
The ( honesty ) too much
And I have to close my eyes and (
lie)
I wanna hold you til I die
Til we both break down and cry
I wanna hold you till the fear ( of ) me ( subside) 

 

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聲姐的聽歌能力越來越牛! -beautifulwind- 給 beautifulwind 發送悄悄話 beautifulwind 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 11/03/2011 postreply 06:27:40

Shake hands! me catched sleep too! -rockcurrent- 給 rockcurrent 發送悄悄話 rockcurrent 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 11/03/2011 postreply 08:56:55

Also "rider". Shake paws. Haha.... -NewVoice- 給 NewVoice 發送悄悄話 NewVoice 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 11/03/2011 postreply 09:33:43

hahaha -beautifulwind- 給 beautifulwind 發送悄悄話 beautifulwind 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 11/03/2011 postreply 09:36:57

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