Could you revise it for me?
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• 寫的挺好的,簡潔全麵。我覺得你可以多些筆墨在fun part上 -1231- ♀ (182 bytes) () 10/29/2011 postreply 10:33:07
• It is your turn ... -lucidus- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/29/2011 postreply 10:41:07
• 寫的挺好的,簡潔全麵。我覺得你可以多些筆墨在fun part上 -1231- ♀ (182 bytes) () 10/29/2011 postreply 10:33:07
• It is your turn ... -lucidus- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/29/2011 postreply 10:41:07