Nice writing!

 

Just my tow cents:

but you are suggested use a dictionary  --> but you are suggested to use a dictionary ?

one commonly word --> one commonly word

Few passerbys give him the money. A young lady gave him a coin, glanced at the sign, then changed the sign to "It is a beautiful day and I can't see it", and afterward the money pours.

--> inconsistent tenses?

gtow --> typo: grow ?

 

 

 

 

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• 回複：Nice writing! -EnLearner- ♀ (243 bytes) () 10/26/2011 postreply 20:43:05

• Correct! Thanks for the correction -rockcurrent- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/26/2011 postreply 20:49:33