Even though New York city is the home of many broadway artists and movie stars, an internet celebrity of China chose to stay away from the bustling area of New York to live in a nail salon in Brooklyn to avoid (the) public scrutiny back in China.
home 雖然也通,但聖地沒有翻出來.
an internet celebrity of China -> a Chinese internet celebrity 好些
chose -> has chosen
總體比較通順,至少讀起來不費勁.
