謝謝愚教授指正！

來源: beautifulwind 於 2011-09-14 20:12:32 [檔案] [博客] [舊帖] [給我悄悄話] 閱讀數 : (568 bytes)

回答: 回複：My attempt. 由 EnLearner 於 2011-09-14 19:18:43

On the Venice Film Festival Awards ceremony?

Agree. awards 應該去掉複數s？

three out of the eight total top awars -- why total?

腦子裏自己蹦出來的。去掉。

Tenses are not consistent?

film makers are recognized by the world and they influenced the world

改成they are influencing？

您的位置：文學城 » 論壇 » 美語世界 » 謝謝愚教授指正！

• 回複：謝謝愚教授指正！ -EnLearner- ♀ (744 bytes) () 09/14/2011 postreply 20:26:03

• Great! Thanks! -beautifulwind- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/14/2011 postreply 20:29:55