好久不見，大家好-貼一個ESL老師給我改過的作業--寫明信片。

Dear Mai,

Hello from i999 in Munich. It is my third visit to Munich and won’t be my last time.

When I stroll on the stone-paved roads built by the Romans and look at the historic buildings, the great history of Germany fills my mind. I felt very close to the great musicians, philosophers, writers, artists and architects in German history. I will go to the new swan castle which is the prototype of the castles in Disneyland tomorrow.

 

Keep in touch!

 

有了老師的好處是不愁磚了。

所有跟帖： 

• 問好，謝分享。 -紫君- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/13/2011 postreply 12:29:19

• 老相好終於回來學習了！我沒明白 -非文學青年- ♀ (53 bytes) () 09/13/2011 postreply 13:52:12

• 不是，是課堂練習，老師出的題目讓我們5分鍾寫好的練習。隨便寫一個地方，介紹給朋友。 -i999- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/13/2011 postreply 15:09:37

• 向文班的禦用的999保安大人問好。一出場就有好東西給我們。 -bingli- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/13/2011 postreply 13:58:21

• 我替我主子給您請安！ -i999- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/13/2011 postreply 15:10:07

• 歡迎99回來！你咋總這麽humble呢。別把你的老相好寵壞了。 -beautifulwind- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/13/2011 postreply 19:15:24

• 她就是這麽貧。唉，她剛回來就跟我請假說要走一陣了，555，有點兒事要忙半月。 -非文學青年- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/13/2011 postreply 19:44:25

• 她幹啥事為什麽像小千一樣這麽focus啊，上來露個麵也就是一分鍾的事。 -beautifulwind- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/13/2011 postreply 19:47:01

• 老相好終於回來了。問好。 -EnLearner- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/13/2011 postreply 19:07:26

• 寫的真好。 期待你以後多寫一點德國～ -jennea- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/13/2011 postreply 20:34:28

• Why is the tense changing between stroll...felt...? -衝浪潛水員- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/14/2011 postreply 03:52:22