CO: A very unique perspective！Wonderful writing~

To be frank, sentence structure wise, it's much nicer and clearer than last one. And the way you compare these two books is very original and intriguing.

Wanna yap something on this big topic, but too tired~.

Just a few tiny  "bricks" this time 

As a Chinese immigrant with very similar background

>> with A very similar background 

No matter what your background is, no matter how poor your family is, you have an equal chance to make it in America as long as you work hard.

>> No matter…., no matter are two sentences

No matter….. AND  no matter?

However, near the end of the novel, we see Nan, disgusted by his realization that he has been making up excuses for not writing poems during all these years of pursuing the so-called American Dream, burns a bunch of banknotes.

>> We see Nan…..burn/burning a bunch of banknotes ?

see ***** do/doing sth

 

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• 這次的磚都非常精準！大謝！ -非文學青年- ♀ (609 bytes) () 09/11/2011 postreply 22:16:52

• lilac國內也是英文專業畢業的吧。好奇一下。不必回答，如果你不想的話。 -beautifulwind- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/11/2011 postreply 22:30:47

• 汗那，這麽會問問題呀, MM~~ -lilac09- ♀ (446 bytes) () 09/12/2011 postreply 08:47:40

• wow~~~~ -好學又好問- ♀ (115 bytes) () 09/12/2011 postreply 08:57:26

• 我覺得好學mm其實也很象英專的。 -非文學青年- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/12/2011 postreply 09:20:51

• 我是半瓶子醬油。 -好學又好問- ♀ (279 bytes) () 09/12/2011 postreply 09:35:31

• 好學mm博覽群書，見多識廣，俺真是自愧不如~~ -lilac09- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/12/2011 postreply 10:07:57

• haha, 我心裏平衡了 -非文學青年- ♀ (94 bytes) () 09/12/2011 postreply 09:18:09

• 回樓上好學mm和文青mm~~ -lilac09- ♀ (1077 bytes) () 09/12/2011 postreply 10:06:03

• wow，等於一瓶牛頭牌沙茶醬！--牛牛牛啊！！！ -beautifulwind- ♀ (51 bytes) () 09/12/2011 postreply 22:50:11