這些家夥們肯定是嫉妒你背誦得好，給了你不少磚頭。哈哈。我的小磚頭和一點寫作的建議

I like reading Chinese novels since I was in elementary schools. -->I have liked reading Chinese novels since elementary school.

even on(at) dinner tables with my parents scolding me--> “despite my parents’ scolding” seems better.

 I was trained to grasp the “truth” out of the “details”, keeping only the “truth” and discarding the “details”, believing that I could deducte the details later myself. Keeping and discarding   是不是要換成 to keep，to discard? not totally sure.

I blamed this mainly for lacking (the lack )of vocabularies(y?). Everyone has vocabulary, 不能說lack of vocabulary，換成：my small vocabulary，my limited vocabulary， maybe?

bother others with my own tiny little small world—>tiny little small? All three of them together?   

But hey, after reading Eat Pray Love, I regained my confidence. -->have regained

imagining traveling across the world-->across the country, but around the world.

我覺得寫得很好是因為flow很好，明顯覺得寫的時候是用英文思考。一點建議就是應該講一講Why were your frustrated about writing? Why do you want to work on it? for professional purpose, as a hobby, or just want to have this skill set? Give some examples in your life, some anecdotes will flesh it out.

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• I made a lot of stupid mistakes -jennea- ♀ (603 bytes) () 08/28/2011 postreply 23:04:23

• 更新了， 大謝！ -jennea- ♀ (93 bytes) () 08/28/2011 postreply 23:20:29

• 恩，這個我也覺得不好改。 -非文學青年- ♀ (101 bytes) () 08/28/2011 postreply 23:36:04